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In reference to the controversy section of your article: All information present is hearsay. You even say that in the article. You claim to be "the trustworthy encyclopedia" and yet you include open hearsay in you articles. This does not make sense. Expect change. {{unsigned|IslamWarrior}}
In reference to the controversy section of your article: All information present is hearsay. You even say that in the article. You claim to be "the trustworthy encyclopedia" and yet you include open hearsay in you articles. This does not make sense. Expect change. {{unsigned|IslamWarrior}}
== Trim-dowm ==
While above editors suggest keeping the information because it is relevant to Conservapedias target age group, it should be understood that all of this information would most likely already be known by the reader (due to experience in the game, reading the official website, or being told by their friends). Instead of having a section with several sentences for each race, class, and profession, I think it would be beneficial to congeal these sections into a few paragraphs each. I could draft an alternate version if instructed how, or just edit this article directly. Regardless of these specific issues, the article itself needs work. Is it acceptable if I rework these sections into more coherent prose? --[[User:JamzJohnson|JamzJohnson]] 23:15, 3 July 2008 (EDT)