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Too much opinion and editorializing
This article looks like it was written by a semi-literate child copying from a pamphlet. It could use a very thorough re-write from an expert.
This article looks like it was written by a semi-literate child copying from a pamphlet. It could use a very thorough re-write from an expert.
[[User:Palmd001|Palmd001]] 20:12, 18 March 2007 (EDT)
[[User:Palmd001|Palmd001]] 20:12, 18 March 2007 (EDT)
== Too much opinion and editorializing ==
I agree that this article is poorly written, but it appears to contain grammatical and syntactical errors related to English not beong the writer's native language.
If this site is going to be taken seriously, it cannot such show obvious bias, opinion and editorializing. If the articles just stick to facts, the people who use this site can draw their own conclusions. This article can discuss the state of religion and the general position of Swedes on social issues without commenting that these things are somehow "bad." The conservative reader can draw this conclusion on his own without being told this is how he or she is supposed to think.
--[[User:Vonratt|Vonratt]] 16:09, 19 March 2007 (EDT)