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:My high school showed it in science class.  In discussions in college with cross sections of students from across the United States, their experiences had been the same.  Recent discussions on debate boards left current high school students amazed when I pointed out to them just how far apart the movie was from the reality of the event, a film they had just seen in their science classes.  I am glad your school was more enlightened.  Many are not.  It stays. [[User:Learn together|Learn together]] 12:51, 1 August 2008 (EDT)
 
:My high school showed it in science class.  In discussions in college with cross sections of students from across the United States, their experiences had been the same.  Recent discussions on debate boards left current high school students amazed when I pointed out to them just how far apart the movie was from the reality of the event, a film they had just seen in their science classes.  I am glad your school was more enlightened.  Many are not.  It stays. [[User:Learn together|Learn together]] 12:51, 1 August 2008 (EDT)
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::Wow, that's sad that your school and others did that (and ironic, because mine was in "Liberal" NYC).  I'm not going to challenge your anecdotal evidence, but maybe a reference could be added to state that "This occurred in XYZ H.S. in NameOfState during the 19xx's, and in several other public high schools based on discussions with college students at ABC University in the 19xx's". 
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::Also, I'd ask that you change the following, "Both completely lied about the facts in order to harm Christianity, misleading students who read or enact the play and everyone who saw the movie.", to something like "The changes in dramatizing the story altered significant facts, misleading students who relied on the film or play as their sole reference for what happened in the actual Scopes trial."  Unless you have a valid source that shows the intent of the dramatic changes was to purposefully harm Christianity, then that's just an opinion. --[[User:DinsdaleP|DinsdaleP]] 13:35, 1 August 2008 (EDT)
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