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The article states something about "criticized heavily for mind control and brainwashing" and references ''Time Magazine''.  The ''Time'' article is 11 pages long, that is a long article.  If a reader wanted to find more information about that issue, he would be forced to read through the whole article to find it.  Does it actually say, in there anywhere "criticized heavily for mind control and brainwashing" ?  I could not find that phrase.  Why don't we get a little bit more specific, why don't we serve our readers a tiny bit better and provide at least a page number, or two pages numbers ?  I bring this issue up because such references that say Scientology practices either mind control OR brainwashing are very few.  Perhaps ''Time'' is the only one that says both.  Let's serve our readers with good articles, let's not encourage them to spend hours of reading to understand our 4 paragraph article. [[User:Terryeo|Terryeo]] 22:39, 19 March 2007 (EDT)

The article states something about "criticized heavily for mind control and brainwashing" and references ''Time Magazine''.  The ''Time'' article is 11 pages long, that is a long article.  If a reader wanted to find more information about that issue, he would be forced to read through the whole article to find it.  Does it actually say, in there anywhere "criticized heavily for mind control and brainwashing" ?  I could not find that phrase.  Why don't we get a little bit more specific, why don't we serve our readers a tiny bit better and provide at least a page number, or two pages numbers ?  I bring this issue up because such references that say Scientology practices either mind control OR brainwashing are very few.  Perhaps ''Time'' is the only one that says both.  Let's serve our readers with good articles, let's not encourage them to spend hours of reading to understand our 4 paragraph article. [[User:Terryeo|Terryeo]] 22:39, 19 March 2007 (EDT)