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:It's a record.  The previous record was in mid-August, when he raised $7.8m in a day.  But this is the first time a campaign has raised over $10m in 24 hours.  --[[User:Jareddr|Jareddr]] 14:17, 5 September 2008 (EDT)
 
:It's a record.  The previous record was in mid-August, when he raised $7.8m in a day.  But this is the first time a campaign has raised over $10m in 24 hours.  --[[User:Jareddr|Jareddr]] 14:17, 5 September 2008 (EDT)
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::Hello, I hope everyone is having a blessed day!
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::I noticed the mention of the hurricane was truncated a bit (which is fine) but the way it now reads one could mistakenly believe that the Twin Cities were visited by a freakish hurricane. Now, we all ''know'' that this isn't the case but in four years when a child is researching "what happened in 2008" it may well jump out at them.
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::Either leave out all mention of the hurricane or re-add some of the old edit(s) to make a more complete picture.
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::My vote would go to axing the whether story, (remember the lousy whther of the 2004 RNC? Neither do '''I'''. [[User talk:MargeryCampbell|Marge]] 14:26, 5 September 2008 (EDT)

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