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Talk:Essay:Best Concepts to Teach Teenagers (view source)
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:::#It ''never'' rains on the Moon.
:::#It ''never'' rains on the Moon.
:::1) is fine as an offhand expression, but only 2) survives strict scrutiny. The kindest thing to say about point 6 is that it uses "never" in as loose a fashion as my first example. --[[User:JohnZ|JohnZ]] 15:13, 7 September 2008 (EDT)
:::1) is fine as an offhand expression, but only 2) survives strict scrutiny. The kindest thing to say about point 6 is that it uses "never" in as loose a fashion as my first example. --[[User:JohnZ|JohnZ]] 15:13, 7 September 2008 (EDT)
::::I think #6 just needs to be reworded. I understand the concept, and agree with it, but I think it needs some sort of qualifying statement, e.g. "In a traditional family unit..." I would edit this in myself, but I'm not sure about the policy of editing others' essays.
::::--[[User:LautRN|Jeffrey W. Lauttamus]][[User_talk:LautRN|<sub>Discussion</sub>]] 10:14, 9 September 2008 (EDT)
==Sheep or Shepherd==
==Sheep or Shepherd==