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==Controversial?==
==Controversial?==
What is controversial about the comment regarding offshore drilling? Why is the word rape bolded? That is a completely appropriate use of the word as in "rape and pillage". [[User:ClarkeD|ClarkeD]] 21:01, 25 August 2008 (EDT)
What is controversial about the comment regarding offshore drilling? Why is the word rape bolded? That is a completely appropriate use of the word as in "rape and pillage". [[User:ClarkeD|ClarkeD]] 21:01, 25 August 2008 (EDT)
==Grammar==
''(At Syracuse Law School, he had plagiarized a law review article in a class paper he wrote. Although he was permitted to retake the course after receiving an F.)'' The grammar of this sentence is incorrect. After reading the source, I changed it to: ''(He has admitted that in his first year at Syracuse Law School, he plagiarized a law review article; he was permitted to retake the course after receiving an F.)''<ref>http://query.nytimes.com/gst/fullpage.html?res=9B0DE3DB143FF93BA2575AC0A961948260</ref> I don't mind if anyone wants to change the content, or come up with a better way to write the section, but please use proper grammar! --[[User:Hsmom|Hsmom]] 15:41, 10 September 2008 (EDT)