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:: I'm out of time now, but if I don't forget, I'll come back in a couple of hours and either put Humblpi's wording in or think of something better myself. Unless of course someone has beaten me to it.
:: I'm out of time now, but if I don't forget, I'll come back in a couple of hours and either put Humblpi's wording in or think of something better myself. Unless of course someone has beaten me to it.
:: [[User:Philip J. Rayment|Philip J. Rayment]] 03:08, 24 April 2008 (EDT)
:: [[User:Philip J. Rayment|Philip J. Rayment]] 03:08, 24 April 2008 (EDT)
==Bias?==
There appears to be some bias present in this article, as well as a preponderance of criticisms. Some more balance might be achieved by removing the biased language in the chapter analysis, and adding some positive reviews to balance out the criticisms. --[[User:Diagoras|Diagoras]] 23:04, 1 October 2008 (EDT)