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| − | I found that there were several grammatical errors in the page and thought I'd run through them:
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| − | 1. 1st sentence of the Creationism and Intelligent Design section has a double "the" in the phrase "believe that the the natural world." <br />
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| − | 2. 2nd sentence of the same section reads "Recently, there has been," and may be an effort by liberals to make Conservapedia sound like lolcats.<br />
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| − | 3. 5th sentence of the same section has a double "of" in the phrase "advocates of of creationism," which may stem from liberals' misuse of prepositions in trying to sabotage this article.
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| − | Hope this helps!--[[User:Limbo|Limbo]] 14:24, 3 October 2008 (EDT)
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| | I would like to include mention of [[Cdesign proponentsists]] in the paragraph about the Dover case as an argument linking creationism and ID. I can not edit the page to do this, so will someone with authority please review and include it. --[[User:Gman2|Gman2]] 18:06, 4 February 2008 (EST) | | I would like to include mention of [[Cdesign proponentsists]] in the paragraph about the Dover case as an argument linking creationism and ID. I can not edit the page to do this, so will someone with authority please review and include it. --[[User:Gman2|Gman2]] 18:06, 4 February 2008 (EST) |
| | : I've unlocked the article, but I don't think that the term deserves mention in the article. It's little more than irrelevant trivia. [[User:Philip J. Rayment|Philip J. Rayment]] 21:00, 4 February 2008 (EST) | | : I've unlocked the article, but I don't think that the term deserves mention in the article. It's little more than irrelevant trivia. [[User:Philip J. Rayment|Philip J. Rayment]] 21:00, 4 February 2008 (EST) |
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| | + | == Basic Grammar Changes == |
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| | + | I found that there were several grammatical errors in the page and thought I'd run through them: |
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| | + | 1. 1st sentence of the Creationism and Intelligent Design section has a double "the" in the phrase "believe that the the natural world." <br /> |
| | + | 2. 2nd sentence of the same section reads "Recently, there has been," and may be an effort by liberals to make Conservapedia sound like lolcats.<br /> |
| | + | 3. 5th sentence of the same section has a double "of" in the phrase "advocates of of creationism," which may stem from liberals' misuse of prepositions in trying to sabotage this article. |
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| | + | Hope this helps!--[[User:Limbo|Limbo]] 14:24, 3 October 2008 (EDT) |
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| | + | : Thanks; I've fixed each of them. Without checking the history, though, I suspect just simple typos rather than "liberal" sabotage. [[User:Philip J. Rayment|Philip J. Rayment]] 20:29, 3 October 2008 (EDT) |