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{{Wikiproject Religion}}
 
{{Wikiproject Religion}}
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== Basic Grammar Changes ==
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I found that there were several grammatical errors in the page and thought I'd run through them:
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1. 1st sentence of the Creationism and Intelligent Design section has a double "the" in the phrase "believe that the the natural world." <br />
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2. 2nd sentence of the same section reads "Recently, there has been," and may be an effort by liberals to make Conservapedia sound like lolcats.<br />
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3. 5th sentence of the same section has a double "of" in the phrase "advocates of of creationism," which may stem from liberals' misuse of prepositions in trying to sabotage this article.
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Hope this helps!--[[User:Limbo|Limbo]] 14:24, 3 October 2008 (EDT)
      
== Added material about Dover Trial ==
 
== Added material about Dover Trial ==
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I would like to include mention of [[Cdesign proponentsists]] in the paragraph about the Dover case as an argument linking creationism and ID. I can not edit the page to do this, so will someone with authority please review and include it. --[[User:Gman2|Gman2]] 18:06, 4 February 2008 (EST)
 
I would like to include mention of [[Cdesign proponentsists]] in the paragraph about the Dover case as an argument linking creationism and ID. I can not edit the page to do this, so will someone with authority please review and include it. --[[User:Gman2|Gman2]] 18:06, 4 February 2008 (EST)
 
: I've unlocked the article, but I don't think that the term deserves mention in the article.  It's little more than irrelevant trivia.  [[User:Philip J. Rayment|Philip J. Rayment]] 21:00, 4 February 2008 (EST)
 
: I've unlocked the article, but I don't think that the term deserves mention in the article.  It's little more than irrelevant trivia.  [[User:Philip J. Rayment|Philip J. Rayment]] 21:00, 4 February 2008 (EST)
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== Basic Grammar Changes ==
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I found that there were several grammatical errors in the page and thought I'd run through them:
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1. 1st sentence of the Creationism and Intelligent Design section has a double "the" in the phrase "believe that the the natural world." <br />
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2. 2nd sentence of the same section reads "Recently, there has been," and may be an effort by liberals to make Conservapedia sound like lolcats.<br />
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3. 5th sentence of the same section has a double "of" in the phrase "advocates of of creationism," which may stem from liberals' misuse of prepositions in trying to sabotage this article.
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Hope this helps!--[[User:Limbo|Limbo]] 14:24, 3 October 2008 (EDT)
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: Thanks; I've fixed each of them.  Without checking the history, though, I suspect just simple typos rather than "liberal" sabotage.  [[User:Philip J. Rayment|Philip J. Rayment]] 20:29, 3 October 2008 (EDT)
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