Additionally, the first two paragraphs read more like an advertisement than a description. I was going to change it myself, but I tend to be heavy-handed with such things, and wanted to give the original author a chance to use a scalpel before I get out my chain saw :) [[User:HelpJazz|Help]][[User talk:HelpJazz|Jazz]] 13:50, 6 October 2008 (EDT) | Additionally, the first two paragraphs read more like an advertisement than a description. I was going to change it myself, but I tend to be heavy-handed with such things, and wanted to give the original author a chance to use a scalpel before I get out my chain saw :) [[User:HelpJazz|Help]][[User talk:HelpJazz|Jazz]] 13:50, 6 October 2008 (EDT) |