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:Sounds good, though I'd be inclined not to mention the wallpaper, as it seems entirely irrelevant, maybe even coincidental, and the only other reference to a train I can recall is one passing by in a single scene, so "a number of references to trains" seems an exaggeration. [[User:SamJ|SamJ]] 16:46, 28 October 2008 (EDT)
 
:Sounds good, though I'd be inclined not to mention the wallpaper, as it seems entirely irrelevant, maybe even coincidental, and the only other reference to a train I can recall is one passing by in a single scene, so "a number of references to trains" seems an exaggeration. [[User:SamJ|SamJ]] 16:46, 28 October 2008 (EDT)
 
::Makes sense.  Let's leave out the train reference sentence until we can come up with more/better examples. So we are left with ''"Despite the name, ''Trainspotting'' does not have anything directly to do with the hobby of train spotting, in which railfans keep track of the rolling stock they've seen.  The name refers to a scene in the original novel, which was not included in the movie."'' [[User:Philip J. Rayment|Philip J. Rayment]], [[User:HelpJazz|Help]][[User talk:HelpJazz|Jazz]], can you also take a look and see if you have changes to suggest? --[[User:Hsmom|Hsmom]] 18:33, 28 October 2008 (EDT)
 
::Makes sense.  Let's leave out the train reference sentence until we can come up with more/better examples. So we are left with ''"Despite the name, ''Trainspotting'' does not have anything directly to do with the hobby of train spotting, in which railfans keep track of the rolling stock they've seen.  The name refers to a scene in the original novel, which was not included in the movie."'' [[User:Philip J. Rayment|Philip J. Rayment]], [[User:HelpJazz|Help]][[User talk:HelpJazz|Jazz]], can you also take a look and see if you have changes to suggest? --[[User:Hsmom|Hsmom]] 18:33, 28 October 2008 (EDT)
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::: I'm happy with that version.  The source I found on which I based the current wording was no better than other ones mentioned above, so this is as good as anything.  [[User:Philip J. Rayment|Philip J. Rayment]] 21:27, 28 October 2008 (EDT)
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