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→Proposed replacement language for Loch Ness monster material
==Proposed replacement language for Loch Ness monster material==
==Proposed replacement language for Loch Ness monster material==
I propose that the current paragraph:
Pursuant to [[User:Conservative]]'s suggestion [[User_talk:Dpbsmith#Compromise.__I_put_a_link_for_you|here]]:
I propose that the paragraph currently reading
:Since 565 A.D. there are reports about the Loch Ness Monster (Nessie by birth), a large Monster living in Loch Ness, near Inverness, Scotland. People who saw Nessie described the Monster as it would look similar to a dinosaur. In the life story of St. Columba, there is an account of him driving off a monster attacking a Pict. Some have taken this to refer to the Loch Ness Monster.
:Since 565 A.D. there are reports about the Loch Ness Monster (Nessie by birth), a large Monster living in Loch Ness, near Inverness, Scotland. People who saw Nessie described the Monster as it would look similar to a dinosaur. In the life story of St. Columba, there is an account of him driving off a monster attacking a Pict. Some have taken this to refer to the Loch Ness Monster.
be replaced with this sentence:
be replaced with this sentence: