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:::: You must not have read my comment, in which I made a suggestion to improve the article's first sentence.  What's yours?  You might try contributing something to the debate rather than trying to shoot the messenger.  The message is  - the article's a disaster.  Now, what are you doing about that?  [[User:FNNoonan|FNNoonan]] 16:24, 29 January 2009 (EST)
 
:::: You must not have read my comment, in which I made a suggestion to improve the article's first sentence.  What's yours?  You might try contributing something to the debate rather than trying to shoot the messenger.  The message is  - the article's a disaster.  Now, what are you doing about that?  [[User:FNNoonan|FNNoonan]] 16:24, 29 January 2009 (EST)
 
:::::I don't think it a disaster, but a multi-layered and well-argued piece. Looking at the revision history and talk pages, I see that some of the best minds on Consercvapedia think so, too. Therefore I have no need to do anything. You, on the other hand, see faults, but do nothing except indulge yourself in corrosive criticism. [[User:MauriceB|MauriceB]] 17:10, 29 January 2009 (EST)
 
:::::I don't think it a disaster, but a multi-layered and well-argued piece. Looking at the revision history and talk pages, I see that some of the best minds on Consercvapedia think so, too. Therefore I have no need to do anything. You, on the other hand, see faults, but do nothing except indulge yourself in corrosive criticism. [[User:MauriceB|MauriceB]] 17:10, 29 January 2009 (EST)
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::::::I would also point out that the article even fails to mention which country he's President of.  I would again recommend the inclusion of my suggested opening sentence - "Barack Hussein Obama is the 44th and current President of the United States of America".  Thank you for helping to improve this terrible article.  [[User:FNNoonan|FNNoonan]] 14:34, 30 January 2009 (EST)
    
== Real Bible NOT Koran ==
 
== Real Bible NOT Koran ==
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