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| | 1. To learn about world history and come out with a good grade. | | 1. To learn about world history and come out with a good grade. |
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| | + | :Good. |
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| − | 2. I like the timeline of the drawings with meanings like the sun. It’s interesting how it goes from hard to harder. Why wouldn’t they go to easier. | + | 2. I like the timeline of the drawings with meanings like the sun. It’s interesting how it goes from hard to harder. Why wouldn’t they go to easier? |
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| | + | :Interesting insight! |
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| | 3. I think they deal with things similarly. The Jews were stoned if they lied to someone, and the Babylonians tongues were cut out. | | 3. I think they deal with things similarly. The Jews were stoned if they lied to someone, and the Babylonians tongues were cut out. |
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| | + | :Good. |
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| | 4. Samaria, [[Babylon]], [[Israel]], Persia, [[Egypt]]. I liked Persia best because they had great strategy to take over Babylon with [[elephant]]s. | | 4. Samaria, [[Babylon]], [[Israel]], Persia, [[Egypt]]. I liked Persia best because they had great strategy to take over Babylon with [[elephant]]s. |
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| | + | :"Sumer", not "Samaria" (which was a city in the Kingdom of Israel later). (Minus 1). |
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| | 5. The Fight between [[Christianity]] and [[Islam]]. It started with Ishmael and Isaac | | 5. The Fight between [[Christianity]] and [[Islam]]. It started with Ishmael and Isaac |
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| | + | :Good. |
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| | 6. The Old Kingdom, The Middle Kingdom, and the New Kingdom. I think it was just amazing how they made those pyramids. | | 6. The Old Kingdom, The Middle Kingdom, and the New Kingdom. I think it was just amazing how they made those pyramids. |
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| | + | :Good, but add dates. (Minus 1). |
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| | Honors | | Honors |
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| | + | H1. Jerusalem was the place where Solomon built God's temple. |
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| − | H1. Jerusalem was the place where Solomon built Gods temple.
| + | :Right. |
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| | + | H4. Even though Hammurabi’s code really help them to excel, it was way to harsh of a code in some situations. If a surgeon loses a patient that is out of his control. He should not be punished in losing his had for something he could not control. |
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| − | H2.
| + | :Excellent point. May use as a model answer. |
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| − | | + | :Good start. Score: 78/80. |
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| − | H4. Even though Hammurabi’s code really help them to excel, it was way to harsh of a code in some situations. If I surgeons loses a patient that is out of his control. He should not be punished in losing his had for something he could not control.
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| | [[Category:World History lectures]] | | [[Category:World History lectures]] |