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1. To learn about world history and come out with a good grade.
 
1. To learn about world history and come out with a good grade.
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:Good.
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2. I like the timeline of the drawings with meanings like the sun. It’s interesting how it goes from hard to harder. Why wouldn’t they go to easier.
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2. I like the timeline of the drawings with meanings like the sun. It’s interesting how it goes from hard to harder. Why wouldn’t they go to easier?
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:Interesting insight!
    
3. I think they deal with things similarly. The Jews were stoned if they lied to someone, and the Babylonians tongues were cut out.  
 
3. I think they deal with things similarly. The Jews were stoned if they lied to someone, and the Babylonians tongues were cut out.  
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:Good.
    
4. Samaria, [[Babylon]], [[Israel]], Persia, [[Egypt]]. I liked Persia best because they had great strategy to take over Babylon with [[elephant]]s.  
 
4. Samaria, [[Babylon]], [[Israel]], Persia, [[Egypt]]. I liked Persia best because they had great strategy to take over Babylon with [[elephant]]s.  
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:"Sumer", not "Samaria" (which was a city in the Kingdom of Israel later).  (Minus 1).
    
5. The Fight between [[Christianity]] and [[Islam]]. It started with Ishmael and Isaac
 
5. The Fight between [[Christianity]] and [[Islam]]. It started with Ishmael and Isaac
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:Good.
    
6. The Old Kingdom, The Middle Kingdom, and the New Kingdom. I think it was just amazing how they made those pyramids.  
 
6. The Old Kingdom, The Middle Kingdom, and the New Kingdom. I think it was just amazing how they made those pyramids.  
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:Good, but add dates.  (Minus 1).
    
Honors
 
Honors
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H1. Jerusalem was the place where Solomon built God's temple.
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H1. Jerusalem was the place where Solomon built Gods temple.  
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:Right.
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H4. Even though Hammurabi’s code really help them to excel, it was way to harsh of a code in some situations. If a surgeon loses a patient that is out of his control. He should not be punished in losing his had for something he could not control.
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H2.  
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:Excellent point.  May use as a model answer.
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:Good start. Score: 78/80.
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H4. Even though Hammurabi’s code really help them to excel, it was way to harsh of a code in some situations. If I surgeons loses a patient that is out of his control. He should not be punished in losing his had for something he could not control.
      
[[Category:World History lectures]]
 
[[Category:World History lectures]]
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