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*You call the Soviet Army the ‘most vicious’ without anything to support such an assertion.  

*You call the Soviet Army the ‘most vicious’ without anything to support such an assertion.  

*You say ‘Russians never surrender’, whilst of course in the Leningrad case in particular they showed extreme resilience, masses of Russian POWs were taken during the war.

*You say ‘Russians never surrender’, whilst of course in the Leningrad case in particular they showed extreme resilience, masses of Russian POWs were taken during the war.

*Mengele’s Ph.D was not based on Darwinian Evolution. I would strongly suggest you cease trying to make any sort of political points of the back of one of the worst atrocities in human history.

*Mengele’s Ph.D was not based on Darwinian Evolution.

*You fail to mention some of the key events in the intelligence war, the capture of Enigma machines and codes of which there are several examples.

*You fail to mention some of the key events in the intelligence war, the capture of Enigma machines and codes of which there are several examples.

*Your claims about Peral Harbour being known about have only some truth to them. Certainly there were many signs that should have been picked up on, but they were not. This was largely due to mistakes lower down the chain of command. If I remember rightly the raid was picked up on radar but was wrongly assumed by some/someone to have been a group of US planes.

*Your claims about Peral Harbour being known about have only some truth to them. Certainly there were many signs that should have been picked up on, but they were not. This was largely due to mistakes lower down the chain of command. If I remember rightly the raid was picked up on radar but was wrongly assumed by some/someone to have been a group of US planes.

*I would also add that 'England' should read 'UK', through normally Britain will suffice. To simply refer to England downplays the contribution of the Welsh, Scottish and Northern Irish.

*I would also add that 'England' should read 'UK', through normally Britain will suffice. To simply refer to England downplays the contribution of the Welsh, Scottish and Northern Irish.

These are just the ones where I could actually identify factual errors, and there are likely others. In general you seem to oversimplify many matters and downplay non-American activities, particularly in WWII. [[User:RobertWDP|RobertWDP]] 17:23, 24 February 2009 (EST)

These are just the ones where I could actually identify factual errors, and there are likely others. In general you seem to oversimplify non-American activities, particularly in WWII. Although I respect the fact that this is predominantly a US resource it is a Wolrd Hisotry course. [[User:RobertWDP|RobertWDP]] 17:23, 24 February 2009 (EST)