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BenjaminH

BenjaminH

1. The “Five Pillars of Islam” are: submission, prayer, fasting, almsgiving, and a pilgrimage to Mecca.  

1. The “Five Pillars of [[Islam]]” are: submission, prayer, fasting, almsgiving, and a pilgrimage to [[Mecca]].  

:Good, a bit more detail would help more.

:Good, a bit more detail would help more.

2. With Islam you are forced to do things. You have to go to Mecca at least once in your life. In Christianity though, the only thing you have to do is love God.

2. With Islam you are forced to do things. You have to go to Mecca at least once in your life. In [[Christianity]] though, the only thing you have to do is love God.

:Interesting answer, might use as a model.

:Interesting answer, might use as a model.

:Good.

:Good.

4. I think it is really neat how they made the age of feudalism. But I like how they had the lords of the castle, down to the vassals. The lords treated the vassals kindly and they had plenty of food to eat and many of them were living better then they might have been living somewhere else.

4. I think it is really neat how they made the age of [[feudalism]]. But I like how they had the lords of the castle, down to the vassals. The lords treated the vassals kindly and they had plenty of food to eat and many of them were living better then they might have been living somewhere else.

:Right.  Superb answer.

:Right.  Superb answer.