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| | + | 1. The Renaissance started somewhere in the 1200’s. One place that the Renaissance could have started was at the fall of Constantinople when it fell to the Turk’s. |
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| − | 1. The Renaissance started somewhere in the 1200’s. One place that the Renaissance could have started was at the fall of Constantinople when it fell to the Turk’s.
| + | :Good insight about the fall of Constantinople. But you're a tad early on the starting date of the Renaissance - 1300s is more like it. Also, when did it end? Be sure to answer the question that is asked. (Minus 1). |
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| | 2. Martin Luther was a law student. One day he was caught outside in the middle of a thunderstorm. Terrified after a bold of lightning struck the ground next to him, he prayed for protection and promised to become a monk if he lived through the storm. He lived through the storm and became a monk. | | 2. Martin Luther was a law student. One day he was caught outside in the middle of a thunderstorm. Terrified after a bold of lightning struck the ground next to him, he prayed for protection and promised to become a monk if he lived through the storm. He lived through the storm and became a monk. |
| | He founded Protestantism in Europ on October 31, 1517, when he nail his 95 “Theses”) | | He founded Protestantism in Europ on October 31, 1517, when he nail his 95 “Theses”) |
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| | + | :Good answer. |
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| | 3. The Baroque was a style that painters began to adopt after the Reformation in Germany. Its motivation was that it appealed spiritually to the audiences, and it made inroads into Protestant regions. | | 3. The Baroque was a style that painters began to adopt after the Reformation in Germany. Its motivation was that it appealed spiritually to the audiences, and it made inroads into Protestant regions. |
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| | + | :Excellent, may use as a model. |
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| | 4. The English language went through three stages: Old English, Middle English, and Modern English. Today we speak Modern English. It began in the 1500’s. | | 4. The English language went through three stages: Old English, Middle English, and Modern English. Today we speak Modern English. It began in the 1500’s. |
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| | + | :Superb. |
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| | 5.Vietnam won its independence in 939. They have always been very fierce fighters. They also treated there with women with high respect. | | 5.Vietnam won its independence in 939. They have always been very fierce fighters. They also treated there with women with high respect. |
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| | + | :Terrific. |
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| | 6I would describe Obama as Machiavellian today because he did whatever it took to get into office. He might have said something one day and another thing another day. | | 6I would describe Obama as Machiavellian today because he did whatever it took to get into office. He might have said something one day and another thing another day. |
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| | + | :Superb, could use this as a model. |
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| | + | :Good work with several potential model answers. 69/70.--[[User:Aschlafly|Andy Schlafly]] 09:23, 22 March 2009 (EDT) |