:Very good, will use as a model. Your conclusion seems to use "right" in a different sense from your first sentence! That leaves the reader thinking, which is good.
:Very good, will use as a model. Your conclusion seems to use "right" in a different sense from your first sentence! That leaves the reader thinking, which is good.
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:Fantastic homework, among the best in the class all year.
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:Fantastic homework, among the best in the class all year. 100/100.
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:By the way, you may want to participate in the final volunteer project to build [[World history final exam term list]].--[[User:Aschlafly|Andy Schlafly]] 22:46, 2 May 2009 (EDT)