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:::::Why were my edits removed? I corrected everything from the intro, including grammar and removing useless statements like "A politician and writer based in Florence of The Renaissance." I also removed "Was he a Machiavellian?" and shifted it into a "Why he wrote his books" piece so that interpretations of his work could have their own section.
:::::Why were my edits removed? I corrected everything from the intro, including grammar and removing useless statements like "A politician and writer based in Florence of The Renaissance." I also removed "Was he a Machiavellian?" and shifted it into a "Why he wrote his books" piece so that interpretations of his work could have their own section.
::::::you need to try your hand at your own articles first before reworking major artricles.[[User:RJJensen|RJJensen]] 00:39, 9 May 2009 (EDT)