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I notice I cannot edit this article, so I thought 'd just post this here - the sentence "This was later moved to 1844, but which also failed." is not very clear.  Perhaps "This was later changed to 1844, but his (the?) prophecy failed to come to pass", or somesuch wording might be a little clearer?  Also, "The chief proponent of this idea was Mrs. Ellen G. White, who along her husband James" needs the word "with" inserted between "along" and "her".  Also, "matching events top the predictions in the Bible." - "top" should be "to".  --[[User:KipDonner|KipDonner]] 18:56, 10 July 2009 (EDT)

I notice I cannot edit this article, so I thought 'd just post this here - the sentence "This was later moved to 1844, but which also failed." is not very clear.  Perhaps "This was later changed to 1844, but his (the?) prophecy failed to come to pass", or somesuch wording might be a little clearer?  Also, "The chief proponent of this idea was Mrs. Ellen G. White, who along her husband James" needs the word "with" inserted between "along" and "her".  Also, "matching events top the predictions in the Bible." - "top" should be "to".  --[[User:KipDonner|KipDonner]] 18:56, 10 July 2009 (EDT)