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Created page with '==Summary of Changes in Rewrite== I did a minor rewrite, more a reorganization, so that information which seemed to belong together was together. As it was, the article seemed ...'
==Summary of Changes in Rewrite==
I did a minor rewrite, more a reorganization, so that information which seemed to belong together was together. As it was, the article seemed to jump back and forth between descriptions of the program, criticisms, and motivations.
I'm not clear, but the article had quoted an individual, Dr. Gabriel Calzada, who works at Universidad Rey Juan Carlos, then later gave another quote attributed to "Carlos," which I've changed to "Calzada" in accordance with the reference for these quotes.
Just wanted to explain why I re-wrote/re-organized this page. [[User:JacobB|JacobB]] 09:36, 14 July 2009 (EDT)
I did a minor rewrite, more a reorganization, so that information which seemed to belong together was together. As it was, the article seemed to jump back and forth between descriptions of the program, criticisms, and motivations.
I'm not clear, but the article had quoted an individual, Dr. Gabriel Calzada, who works at Universidad Rey Juan Carlos, then later gave another quote attributed to "Carlos," which I've changed to "Calzada" in accordance with the reference for these quotes.
Just wanted to explain why I re-wrote/re-organized this page. [[User:JacobB|JacobB]] 09:36, 14 July 2009 (EDT)