Thank you! I've altered your comment to be more formal and appropriate for the "analysis" section. I hope you don't mind!
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|That was the true Light, which lighteth every man that cometh into the world.
|That was the true Light, which lighteth every man that cometh into the world.
|That was the true Light, which animates every man who comes into the world.
|That was the true Light, which animates every man who comes into the world.
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|Modern phrasing I like this! We call this the "Quaker verse" and it's where the phrase "inner light" comes from. I think "animates" is a good choice for the verb.
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|This is the "Quaker verse" and it is where the phrase "inner light" comes from. Animates is a good translation of φωτιζει.