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: I nearly reverted your changes to the introduction, thinking that the new wording was a tad awkward and was getting into criticism before description, but the more I thought about it, the more I concluded that your wording was better than what was there before.  I still think it could be improved, but that might come with the expansion and taking a rather different approach to the introduction.
 
: I nearly reverted your changes to the introduction, thinking that the new wording was a tad awkward and was getting into criticism before description, but the more I thought about it, the more I concluded that your wording was better than what was there before.  I still think it could be improved, but that might come with the expansion and taking a rather different approach to the introduction.
 
: [[User:Philip J. Rayment|Philip J. Rayment]] 09:45, 11 November 2008 (EST)
 
: [[User:Philip J. Rayment|Philip J. Rayment]] 09:45, 11 November 2008 (EST)
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I'd like to point out that "Inherit the Wind" this is not an attempt to portray the Scopes Monkey Trial accurately and in doing so distorting and fictionalizing it. Rather, it is really a play ''based off'' the Scopes Monkey Trial, using the real-life trial for certain plot elements. I suggest a change to present a more accurate picture of the play. [[User:Avoge|Avoge]] 10:00, 27 October 2009 (EDT)
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