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Most of the first section seemed rather patronizing
 
Most of the first section seemed rather patronizing
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==Patronizing==
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The first two sentances are VERY patronizing.
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'Some guns fire small bullets. Some guns fire big bullets. Some guns fire very big bullets'
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Is this aimed at 5 year olds?! This could be a very good article with a little work. [[User:Jennisuk|Jennisuk]] 22:08, 28 March 2007 (EDT)
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