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<br>12) Medicare: yest hat was a liberal position Kennedy took. The articles says that he had a mixed record on domestic issues.

<br>12) Medicare: yest hat was a liberal position Kennedy took. The articles says that he had a mixed record on domestic issues.

<br>13) "uncited and biased new article."  if you call CP administrators names you'll get in trouble.  I actually read all the books that are listed and I expect people to be familiar with come of them before they jump in.  I you want to propose a paragraph, run it thrugh here first.[[User:RJJensen|RJJensen]] 20:37, 8 November 2009 (EST)

<br>13) "uncited and biased new article."  if you call CP administrators names you'll get in trouble.  I actually read all the books that are listed and I expect people to be familiar with come of them before they jump in.  I you want to propose a paragraph, run it thrugh here first.[[User:RJJensen|RJJensen]] 20:37, 8 November 2009 (EST)

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No one is calling you any names, for one. It is a matter of solid fact that the revision you put into the new article has very few citations and many statements of opinion that wouldn't be found in any reputable encyclopedia, conservative or otherwise. A statement like "Kennedy was basically a conservative, but he had to appeal to a primarily liberal base, so he offered symbols for the liberals while following a conservative course in foreign and domestic policy" that doesn't have a citation has no business being there.

No one is calling you any names, for one. It is a matter of solid fact that the revision you put into the new article has very few citations and many statements of opinion that wouldn't be found in any reputable encyclopedia, conservative or otherwise. A statement like "Kennedy was basically a conservative, but he had to appeal to a primarily liberal base, so he offered symbols for the liberals while following a conservative course in foreign and domestic policy" that doesn't have a citation has no business being there.