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|And came down to Capernaum, a city of Galilee, and taught them on the sabbath days.
 
|And came down to Capernaum, a city of Galilee, and taught them on the sabbath days.
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|He arrived at Capernaum, a town in Galilee, and taught on the Sabbath days.
 
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|And they were astonished at his doctrine: for his word was with power.
 
|And they were astonished at his doctrine: for his word was with power.
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|People marveled at His preaching, for His logic was compelling.
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|use "logic" rather than "word" here, and "compelling" rather than "power"?
 
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|And in the synagogue there was a man, which had a spirit of an unclean devil, and cried out with a loud voice,
 
|And in the synagogue there was a man, which had a spirit of an unclean devil, and cried out with a loud voice,
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|In the synagogue a man possessed with the devil shouted out in a loud voice,
 
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|Saying, Let us alone; what have we to do with thee, thou Jesus of Nazareth? art thou come to destroy us? I know thee who thou art; the Holy One of God.
 
|Saying, Let us alone; what have we to do with thee, thou Jesus of Nazareth? art thou come to destroy us? I know thee who thou art; the Holy One of God.
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|"Leave us alone!  What do you want with us, Jesus of Nazareth?  Did you come to destroy us?  I know who you are: the Holy Son of God.
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|use "son" rather than the unisex "one"
 
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