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:: No, no, no! HGridley is wrong. The Bible says no such thing. God has no objection to lesbianism. It's male homosexuals that He is down on. In any case HGridley should be blocked for "talk, talk, talk". Just take a look at his/her contributions. --[[User:HGridley|HGridley]] 17:37, 10 November 2008 (EST)
:: No, no, no! HGridley is wrong. The Bible says no such thing. God has no objection to lesbianism. It's male homosexuals that He is down on. In any case HGridley should be blocked for "talk, talk, talk". Just take a look at his/her contributions. --[[User:HGridley|HGridley]] 17:37, 10 November 2008 (EST)
:::That's just confusing. Which HGridley are you referring to? --[[User:HGridley|HGridley]] 17:44, 10 November 2008 (EST)
:::That's just confusing. Which HGridley are you referring to? --[[User:HGridley|HGridley]] 17:44, 10 November 2008 (EST)
== Health issues: Imprecise wording ==
''In April of 2007, the American Journal of Public Health analyzed data...'' - that's probably imprecise. The journal only did the publishing, not the actual analysis. At least, that's the usual way with scientific articles - scientists do the work and then try to find a journal willing to publish the results. Most likely, the scientists weren't hired by the journal to do this specific study, and probably they weren't even paid by the journal, either. I'd suggest rewording the sentence to:
:''In April of 2007, a study analyzing data from the 2002 National Survey of Family Growth was published in the American Journal of Public Health. The data suggested that lesbian women were 2.69 times more likely...''
Maybe we could also mention the authors of the study, but I don't really think that adds any value to the article. [[User:Yoritomo|Yoritomo]] 12:15, 12 December 2009 (EST)