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The edit summary to the last edit said, "I changed some awkward phrasing. I also think the bullets should be made into one coherent paragraph. Thoughts?"  In fact, that edit introduced liberal bias and censored conservative truth.  It was fully reverted even though it did also include some harmless stylistic changes.--[[User:Aschlafly|Andy Schlafly]] 13:20, 17 August 2009 (EDT)
 
The edit summary to the last edit said, "I changed some awkward phrasing. I also think the bullets should be made into one coherent paragraph. Thoughts?"  In fact, that edit introduced liberal bias and censored conservative truth.  It was fully reverted even though it did also include some harmless stylistic changes.--[[User:Aschlafly|Andy Schlafly]] 13:20, 17 August 2009 (EDT)
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== SCUM ==
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== Citations? ==
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The article claims that Valerie Solanas was the founder of SCUM and that someone named Jilly Cooper was a member of the society. I don't think SCUM was a real organization, it only appears in the SCUM Manifesto, a feminist tract by Solanas, so the claim appears to be inaccurate. --[[User:OscarJ|OscarJ]] 15:04, 17 August 2009 (EDT)
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I'm not clear on the policy.  In the list of quotes, there are some that have written citations, like "as seen in magazine X", but don't give any more information than that.  I think these need real citations or they should be removedAlso, quotes about feminists should be in a separate section than quotes from feminists.--[[User:AdamBurns|AdamBurns]] 18:39, 16 December 2009 (EST)
 
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:Please clarify and correct in the content entryThanks.--[[User:Aschlafly|Andy Schlafly]] 15:21, 17 August 2009 (EDT)
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:A better edit summary than "removing inaccuracy" would be something '''specific''', like "SCUM was a manifesto, not an organization". --[[User:Ed Poor|Ed Poor]] <sup>[[User talk:Ed Poor|Talk]]</sup> 16:02, 17 August 2009 (EDT)
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::Sorry, I thought my explanation on the talk page was specific enough --[[User:OscarJ|OscarJ]] 16:17, 17 August 2009 (EDT)
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:::I meant, specific in the edit summary. You had written, ''correcting misinformation'' [http://www.conservapedia.com/index.php?title=Valerie_Solanas&curid=45279&diff=693711&oldid=605927&rcid=759776]  
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:::The point is to facilitate communication among the contributors, so we don't have to hunt for your reasoning. --[[User:Ed Poor|Ed Poor]] <sup>[[User talk:Ed Poor|Talk]]</sup> 16:27, 17 August 2009 (EDT)
 
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