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First Epistle to Timothy (Translated) (view source)

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|As I besought thee to abide still at Ephesus, when I went into Macedonia, that thou mightest charge some that they teach no other doctrine,
 
|As I besought thee to abide still at Ephesus, when I went into Macedonia, that thou mightest charge some that they teach no other doctrine,
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|I told you to stay in Ephesus and instruct people when I went in Macedonia, and I urge you to continue doing so. They should not teach a different doctrine,
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|I told you to stay in Ephesus and teach during my trip to Macedonia, and urge you to continue doing so to stop the spread of false doctrine.
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|trimmed, reduced repetitious references to "I" as that is disfavored now; retain emphasis on "false doctrine"
 
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|Neither give heed to fables and endless genealogies, which minister questions, rather than godly edifying which is in faith: so do.
 
|Neither give heed to fables and endless genealogies, which minister questions, rather than godly edifying which is in faith: so do.
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|nor focus on myths and endless genealogies, as these engender pointless speculation rather than the divine growth which is in Faith.  
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|Debunk junk science and revisionism, as these engender pointless speculation rather than the divine growth which is in faith.  
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|the 'pointless speculations on myths' have echoes in current issues: global warming, evolution,...
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|the 'pointless speculations on myths' have echoes in current issues: global warming, evolution,... <- superb point, I've tentatively proposed making it stronger
 
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