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| | |For every one that asketh receiveth; and he that seeketh findeth; and to him that knocketh it shall be opened. | | |For every one that asketh receiveth; and he that seeketh findeth; and to him that knocketh it shall be opened. |
| − | | | + | |Everyone who asks shall receive; all who seek shall find; and those who knock shall be welcomed. |
| − | | | + | |tentative solution to lack of antecedent for "it" in "shall be opened": use "welcome" |
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| | |But some of them said, He casteth out devils through Beelzebub the chief of the devils. | | |But some of them said, He casteth out devils through Beelzebub the chief of the devils. |
| − | |But some of the people said, He exorcises demons through Beelzebub, the chief of the demons. | + | |But some complained, "He exorcises demons through Beelzebub, the chief of the demons." |
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| | |And others, tempting him, sought of him a sign from heaven. | | |And others, tempting him, sought of him a sign from heaven. |
| − | | | + | |While others tempted Him by demanding a heavenly sign. |
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| | |But he, knowing their thoughts, said unto them, Every kingdom divided against itself is brought to desolation; and a house divided against a house falleth. | | |But he, knowing their thoughts, said unto them, Every kingdom divided against itself is brought to desolation; and a house divided against a house falleth. |
| − | | | + | |But Jesus, aware of their skepticism, warned them, "Every kingdom that is divided within ultimately fails; a house divided against itself collapses. |
| − | | | + | |the term "skepticism" should be used more to describe the naysayers; use "warned" more often |
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| | |If Satan also be divided against himself, how shall his kingdom stand? because ye say that I cast out devils through Beelzebub. | | |If Satan also be divided against himself, how shall his kingdom stand? because ye say that I cast out devils through Beelzebub. |
| − | | | + | |If Satan were self-conflicted, how could he have any power? Yet you complain that I cast out devils through Beelzebub. |
| − | | | + | |try "self-conflicted" here? |
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| | |And if I by Beelzebub cast out devils, by whom do your sons cast them out? therefore shall they be your judges. | | |And if I by Beelzebub cast out devils, by whom do your sons cast them out? therefore shall they be your judges. |
| − | | | + | |If I somehow used Beelzebub to expel devils, by whom do your people exorcise them? Thus they shall be your judges. |
| − | | | + | |use "somehow" to express hypothetical nature of question. |
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| | |But if I with the finger of God cast out devils, no doubt the kingdom of God is come upon you. | | |But if I with the finger of God cast out devils, no doubt the kingdom of God is come upon you. |
| − | | | + | |If I use the finger of God to case out devils, then undeniably the glory of God is upon you. |
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| | |When a strong man armed keepeth his palace, his goods are in peace: | | |When a strong man armed keepeth his palace, his goods are in peace: |
| − | | | + | |When an armed, strong man guards his palace, his goods are secure: |
| − | | | + | |note juxtaposition of "armed"; this implicates right to keep and bear arms in contemporary debate |
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| | |But when a stronger than he shall come upon him, and overcome him, he taketh from him all his armour wherein he trusted, and divideth his spoils. | | |But when a stronger than he shall come upon him, and overcome him, he taketh from him all his armour wherein he trusted, and divideth his spoils. |
| − | | | + | |But when a stronger opponent arrives and overcomes him, the new man takes from him all his trusted armor, and grabs the treasures. |
| | + | |alternative translations to last phrase: "loots the palace," "plunders the place." |
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| | |He that is not with me is against me: and he that gathereth not with me scattereth. | | |He that is not with me is against me: and he that gathereth not with me scattereth. |
| − | | | + | |He who is not with me is against me, and he who does restore order causes disorder. |
| | + | |tentative: use order/disorder scientific metaphor here rather than farming analogy. |
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| | |When the unclean spirit is gone out of a man, he walketh through dry places, seeking rest; and finding none, he saith, I will return unto my house whence I came out. | | |When the unclean spirit is gone out of a man, he walketh through dry places, seeking rest; and finding none, he saith, I will return unto my house whence I came out. |
| | + | |When a devil leaves a man, he wanders through deserts seeking rest; finding none, he says, "I shall return to my house from which I came." |
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| | |And when he cometh, he findeth it swept and garnished. | | |And when he cometh, he findeth it swept and garnished. |
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