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I realize the '''bad, greedy''' part is supposed to be from a "liberal perspective," but it is not clear. The first full sentence that is bold is my main concern and nearly seems to be vandalism. Also, the final words in the paragraph seem to suggest that '''Big Oil''' (which is an anti-business term) had something for which to be "on the hook" in the first place -- even if meant to come from a liberal perspective. [[User:JustinSatyr|JustinSatyr]] 14:38, 26 December 2009 (EST)
I realize the '''bad, greedy''' part is supposed to be from a "liberal perspective," but it is not clear. The first full sentence that is bold is my main concern and nearly seems to be vandalism. Also, the final words in the paragraph seem to suggest that '''Big Oil''' (which is an anti-business term) had something for which to be "on the hook" in the first place -- even if meant to come from a liberal perspective. [[User:JustinSatyr|JustinSatyr]] 14:38, 26 December 2009 (EST)
:Propose the exact wording you want, and I'll edit the protected page on your behalf. --[[User:Ed Poor|Ed Poor]] <sup>[[User talk:Ed Poor|Talk]]</sup> 16:58, 26 December 2009 (EST)