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Luke 9-16 (Translated) (view source)
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|It is like a grain of mustard seed, which a man took, and cast into his garden; and it grew, and waxed a great tree; and the fowls of the air lodged in the branches of it.
|It is like a grain of mustard seed, which a man took, and cast into his garden; and it grew, and waxed a great tree; and the fowls of the air lodged in the branches of it.
|It is like the tiny mustard seed, which a man took, and cast into his garden; and it grew, and grew a great tree; and the birds of the air nested in the branches of it.
|It is like the tiny mustard seed, which a man took, and cast into his garden; and it grew, and grew into a great tree; and the birds of the air nested in the branches of it.
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|It is like leaven, which a woman took and hid in three measures of meal, till the whole was leavened.
|It is like leaven, which a woman took and hid in three measures of meal, till the whole was leavened.
|It is like the pinch of yeast, which a woman took and mixed into three portions of dough, spreading and growing until all of the dough was leavened.
|It is like the pinch of yeast, which a woman took and mixed into three portions of dough, spreading and growing until all of the dough was leavened."
|This probably needs to be trimmed back
|This probably needs to be trimmed back
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|Behold, your house is left unto you desolate: and verily I say unto you, Ye shall not see me, until the time come when ye shall say, Blessed is he that cometh in the name of the Lord.
|Behold, your house is left unto you desolate: and verily I say unto you, Ye shall not see me, until the time come when ye shall say, Blessed is he that cometh in the name of the Lord.
|Listen up: your house has an emptiness for you. Truly I tell you, "You shall not see me until you shall admit, 'Blessed is he who comes in the name of the Lord!'"
|Listen up: your house has been left to you barren. Truly I tell you, "You shall not see me until you shall admit, 'Blessed is he who comes in the name of the Lord!'"
|"admit" is a big legalistic, but is the best alternative; "emptiness" could be improved
|"admit" is a big legalistic, but is the best alternative; "emptiness" could be improved
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