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|Now upon the first day of the week, very early in the morning, they came unto the sepulchre, bringing the spices which they had prepared, and certain others with them.
|Now upon the first day of the week, very early in the morning, they came unto the sepulchre, bringing the spices which they had prepared, and certain others with them.
|On the first day of the week, very early in the morning, they came to the sepulchre, bringing the spices tey spices they had prepared, and other items to anoint the dead.
|Now on the first day of the week, very early in the morning, they came to the sepulchre, bringing the spices they had prepared, and other items to anoint the dead.
|Should we use "tomb" or stay with sepulchre? My only concern is illustrating the connection to the [[Church of the Holy Sepulchre]].
|Should we use "tomb" or stay with sepulchre? My only concern is illustrating the connection to the [[Church of the Holy Sepulchre]].
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|And they found the stone rolled away from the sepulchre.
|And they found the stone rolled away from the sepulchre.
|But they found the stone had rolled away from the tomb,
|But they found the stone had been rolled away from the tomb,
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|Emphasize that this was not a natural act
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|And they entered in, and found not the body of the Lord Jesus.
|And they entered in, and found not the body of the Lord Jesus.
|and as they entered, they did not see the body of the Lord Jesus.
|Ad as they entered, they did not see the body of the Lord Jesus.
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|And as they were afraid, and bowed down their faces to the earth, they said unto them, Why seek ye the living among the dead?
|And as they were afraid, and bowed down their faces to the earth, they said unto them, Why seek ye the living among the dead?
|and they grew afraid, and bowed their faces to the ground. Them men said to them, "Why are you looking for the living here among the dead?
|And they grew afraid, and bowed their faces to the ground. The men said to them, "Why are you looking for the living here among the dead?
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|And returned from the sepulchre, and told all these things unto the eleven, and to all the rest.
|And returned from the sepulchre, and told all these things unto the eleven, and to all the rest.
|and returned from the tomb, and told all these things to the eleven apostles, and to all the others.
|And returned from the tomb, and told all these things to the eleven disciples, and to all the others.
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|Per talk page discussion, we should not refer to them as Apostles until after the Pentecost narrative, unless the original says it too
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|It was Mary Magdalene, and Joanna, and Mary the mother of James, and other women that were with them, which told these things unto the apostles.
|It was Mary Magdalene, and Joanna, and Mary the mother of James, and other women that were with them, which told these things unto the apostles.
|It was Mary Magdalene, and Joanna, and Mary, the mother of Jesus, and other women who were with them, that told these things to the apostles.
|It was Mary Magdalene, and Joanna, and Mary, the mother of Jesus, and other women who were with them, who described these events to the apostles.
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|Then arose Peter, and ran unto the sepulchre; and stooping down, he beheld the linen clothes laid by themselves, and departed, wondering in himself at that which was come to pass.
|Then arose Peter, and ran unto the sepulchre; and stooping down, he beheld the linen clothes laid by themselves, and departed, wondering in himself at that which was come to pass.
|But Peter stood and ran to the tomb, and stooping inside, he saw the linen clothes laying empty. He left, wondering what could have happened.
|But Peter stood and ran to the tomb, and crouching inside, he saw the linen clothes laying alone. He left, wondering what could have happened.
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