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: * Disagree. Unqualified [[User:Geo.plrd|Geoff Plourde]]<sup>[[User_talk:Geo.plrd|Complain!]]</sup> 01:56, 16 March 2010 (EDT)
 
: * Disagree. Unqualified [[User:Geo.plrd|Geoff Plourde]]<sup>[[User_talk:Geo.plrd|Complain!]]</sup> 01:56, 16 March 2010 (EDT)
 
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: * Disagree. Introduction needs to be rewritten. Last sentences are choppy and unorganized. Use more varied first words for sentences. [[User:Geo.plrd|Geoff Plourde]]<sup>[[User_talk:Geo.plrd|Complain!]]</sup> 01:56, 28 March 2010 (EDT)
 
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: * Agree. --<big>[[User:TK|'''ṬK''']]</big><sub>/Admin</sub><sup>[[User_Talk:TK|/Talk]]</sup> 01:50, 28 March 2010 (EDT)
 
: * Agree. --<big>[[User:TK|'''ṬK''']]</big><sub>/Admin</sub><sup>[[User_Talk:TK|/Talk]]</sup> 01:50, 28 March 2010 (EDT)
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