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:"The term homophobia, as applied to criticism of homosexuality, implies that all such criticism is irrational (see phobia)," substitute:
:"The term homophobia, as applied to criticism of homosexuality, implies that all such criticism is irrational (see phobia)," substitute:
::The term homophobia, as applied to criticism or opposition to homosexuality, implies that all such criticism and opposition is based on an irrational fear and is a type of mental disorder[1] (see phobia)." The footnote would be a reference to 3 sections of the DSM-IV-TR. ([[User:Thunkful|Thunkful]] 18:40, 16 June 2010 (EDT))
::The term homophobia, as applied to criticism or opposition to homosexuality, implies that all such criticism and opposition is based on an irrational fear and is a type of mental disorder[1] (see phobia)." The footnote would be a reference to 3 sections of the DSM-IV-TR. ([[User:Thunkful|Thunkful]] 18:40, 16 June 2010 (EDT))
==Mechanics, Grammar==
The writer has written:
;". . . often take offense at this term, which had led to the use . . . "
Did he mean to put "has," instead of "had"?