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→Women's influence on science: new section
This article needs to be reviewed and rewritten. The fact that in the first paragraph it minimizes women's contribution to science shows this was written by someone who took a few mandatory science classes in high school but never grasped it importance. Reading over the whole thing I cannot figure out if the author is saying science is trying to minimize Christianity or it is the child of Christianity. Science basis itself on hypotheses, experimentation and evaluation of results.
This article needs to be reviewed and rewritten. The fact that in the first paragraph it minimizes women's contribution to science shows this was written by someone who took a few mandatory science classes in high school but never grasped it importance. Reading over the whole thing I cannot figure out if the author is saying science is trying to minimize Christianity or it is the child of Christianity. Science basis itself on hypotheses, experimentation and evaluation of results.
:Do this: Create a [[User:NorthernSights/Science article proposal]], re-write the article as you think it should be, and offer it as a proposed change. It's possible that some or all of what you write could be included in the current article. [[User:Karajou|Karajou]] 16:11, 11 May 2010 (EDT)
:Do this: Create a [[User:NorthernSights/Science article proposal]], re-write the article as you think it should be, and offer it as a proposed change. It's possible that some or all of what you write could be included in the current article. [[User:Karajou|Karajou]] 16:11, 11 May 2010 (EDT)
== Women's influence on science ==
I would like to propose a small change to the second sentence to reflect the growing role of women in the scientific community. Instead of "''Second, there are the men (and a few rare women) of science who have amassed these descriptions and communicate them to everyone else.''", how about: "''Second, there are the men and women of science who have amassed these descriptions and communicate them to everyone else.''
While I am not a politically correctness nut, I do believe everyone is equal, and I think the current sentence portrays most women as not being capable of furthering science. I wanted to hear everyone's opinion on this matter instead of just changing the article without asking. --[[User:Ed Poor|Jaddriscoll]]