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| | What passing-bells for these who die as cattle?<br /> | | What passing-bells for these who die as cattle?<br /> |
| − | Only the monstrous anger of the guns.<br />
| + | Only the monstrous anger of the guns.<br /> |
| − | Only the stuttering rifles' rapid rattle<br />
| + | Only the stuttering rifles' rapid rattle<br /> |
| | Can patter out their hasty orisons.<br /> | | Can patter out their hasty orisons.<br /> |
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| | What candles may be held to speed them all?<br /> | | What candles may be held to speed them all?<br /> |
| − | Not in the hands of boys, but in their eyes<br />
| + | Not in the hands of boys, but in their eyes<br /> |
| | Shall shine the holy glimmers of goodbyes.<br /> | | Shall shine the holy glimmers of goodbyes.<br /> |
| − | The pallor of girls' brows shall be their pall;<br />
| + | The pallor of girls' brows shall be their pall;<br /> |
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| | Their flowers the tenderness of patient minds,<br /> | | Their flowers the tenderness of patient minds,<br /> |
| | And each slow dusk a drawing-down of blinds.<br /> | | And each slow dusk a drawing-down of blinds.<br /> |