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(5) the ACLU's arguments should be described more accurately, preferably in their own words.  
 
(5) the ACLU's arguments should be described more accurately, preferably in their own words.  
 
(6) I also think there should be link to the judge's findings in Selman v. Cobb County <ref>Selman v. Cobb County [http://news.findlaw.com/cnn/docs/religion/selmancobb11305ord.pdf]</ref>, so that students may read his decision for themselves.  Primary sources are critical when trying to understand cases like this, and when striving for academic excellence students should settle for nothing less.  Let's help them find what they need so that they can excell. --[[User:Hsmom|Hsmom]] 12:21, 2 April 2007 (EDT)
 
(6) I also think there should be link to the judge's findings in Selman v. Cobb County <ref>Selman v. Cobb County [http://news.findlaw.com/cnn/docs/religion/selmancobb11305ord.pdf]</ref>, so that students may read his decision for themselves.  Primary sources are critical when trying to understand cases like this, and when striving for academic excellence students should settle for nothing less.  Let's help them find what they need so that they can excell. --[[User:Hsmom|Hsmom]] 12:21, 2 April 2007 (EDT)
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The latest edit is a good start, thank you [[User:RSchlafly|RSchlafly]].  However I still have a few concerns.  First, the source cited does not give the full source of the stickers, so a new source should be given.  Second, the sentence should indicate that the ACLU filed suit on behalf of parents in the district—this gives the full story and prevents the misconception that the ACLU comes in from the outside and makes trouble where it is not wanted (a charge frequently leveled against them).  Third, leaving this in its own subheading still leaves the impression that this is, for the ACLU, a separate issue from the Establishment Clause.  The ACLU participated in this suit because they oppose policy choices motivated by religion not because they are dogmatic evolutionists—leaving this case on its own—especially without giving the ACLUs motivation—gives a false impression.--[[User:Reginod|Reginod]] 13:19, 2 April 2007 (EDT)
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