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3: I do not consider him to be overrated as even though he may have had his flaws, no one has none and despite them he was a great pioneer of exploration.  

3: I do not consider him to be overrated as even though he may have had his flaws, no one doesn't, and despite them he was a great pioneer of exploration.  

4: one could argue that the puritans set up a government that was controlled to a higher degree by the church than the government in England. They did not disagree with church run government, just the specific church that ran the English government.

4: one could argue that the puritans set up a government that was controlled to a higher degree by the church than the government in England. They did not disagree with church run government, just the specific church that ran the English government.

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3: with respect to the triangle trade, I think the economic profit of getting slaves would have been reason enough to make the journey to Africa to get the slaves. So I think that the triangle trade did in fact exist.

3: with respect to the triangle trade, I think the economic profit of selling slaves would have been reason enough to make the journey to Africa aquire them. So I think that the triangle trade did in fact exist.

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