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→Removed Wiccan Murders Section
:You do have a valid point. What could you do to improve the article overall? The following needs to be addressed: what is it about? How many practice it? How do they practice it? The history. Is it related to witchcraft? Things like that to make it a complete and better article. [[User:Karajou|Karajou]] 20:30, 7 May 2011 (EDT)
:You do have a valid point. What could you do to improve the article overall? The following needs to be addressed: what is it about? How many practice it? How do they practice it? The history. Is it related to witchcraft? Things like that to make it a complete and better article. [[User:Karajou|Karajou]] 20:30, 7 May 2011 (EDT)
:Much of that information is already there, it just needs to be fleshed out a little more in certain areas for it to be more complete. Could you remove the murder's section? -HarabecW
:Much of that information is already there, it just needs to be fleshed out a little more in certain areas for it to be more complete. I'll try to add more to it in the days to come. Could you remove the murder's section? -HarabecW
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Made the introduction more readable and removed weasel words. Corrected some spelling and punctuation issues. -HarabecW
Made the introduction more readable and removed weasel words. Corrected some spelling and punctuation issues. -HarabecW