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==Restructuring the article==

==Restructuring the article==

With all the news about Harold Camping, I decided to visit the CP page about the Rapture. After reading it, I noticed a few things: (1) Three independent lead-in paragraphs, (2) an intro section that is far longer than the remainder of the article, and (3) a lack of flow from one thought to another. Because of this, I have tried to restructure the article with better subheadings. I haven't changed the content too much but I believe the article deserves a better arrangement of ideas than what existed before. [[User:Michael4|Michael4]] 00:41, 22 May 2011 (EDT) And JonG, yes, I have added a brief reference as well. [[User:Michael4|Michael4]] 00:41, 22 May 2011 (EDT)

With all the news about Harold Camping, I decided to visit the CP page about the Rapture. After reading it, I noticed a few things: (1) Three independent lead-in paragraphs, (2) an intro section that is far longer than the remainder of the article, and (3) a lack of flow from one thought to another. Because of this, I have tried to restructure the article with better subheadings. I haven't changed the content too much but I believe the article deserves a better arrangement of ideas than what existed before. And JonG, yes, I have added a brief reference as well. [[User:Michael4|Michael4]] 00:42, 22 May 2011 (EDT)