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→Burning churches was a crowning political effect?: looks good
::It sounds like cleaned up langauge to begin with. "The crowning achievement was the burning of churches" is what the author probably intended to say. The whole sentence needs to go, unless it can be replaced with something <ehem> more NPOV. [[User:RobSmith|Rob Smith]] 21:40, 14 June 2011 (EDT)
::It sounds like cleaned up langauge to begin with. "The crowning achievement was the burning of churches" is what the author probably intended to say. The whole sentence needs to go, unless it can be replaced with something <ehem> more NPOV. [[User:RobSmith|Rob Smith]] 21:40, 14 June 2011 (EDT)
:::Updated. Check it. --[[User:Churchofthetrail|Church of the Trail]] 21:54, 14 June 2011 (EDT)
:::Updated. Check it. --[[User:Churchofthetrail|Church of the Trail]] 21:54, 14 June 2011 (EDT)
::::Looks good. "of, for, and by the people" is not necessarily contemporaneous language, and a murderous mob isn't really democratic, but it's something we can work with. [[User:RobSmith|Rob Smith]] 22:10, 14 June 2011 (EDT)