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I'm not sure of the proper ediquette for editing articles on this site, so i'll wait for a response before i edit it again, as it got reverted last time. In the opening paragraph it says "It defends traditional marriage by enabling...". This is a biased statement. The article should explain what the act does, and let the reader decide whether or not it actually defends traditional marriage. I suggest that it be changed to "It enables...". I apologize for changing it without asking before, i'm new here and dont really know how things work.

I'm not sure of the proper ediquette for editing articles on this site, so i'll wait for a response before i edit it again, as it got reverted last time. In the opening paragraph it says "It defends traditional marriage by enabling...". This is a biased statement. The article should explain what the act does, and let the reader decide whether or not it actually defends traditional marriage. I suggest that it be changed to "It enables...". I apologize for changing it without asking before, i'm new here and dont really know how things work.--[[User:Jasonb242|Jasonb242]] 00:06, 18 June 2011 (EDT)