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Article is looking great! Keep up the great work and I'm looking forward to your Cash and Seeger articles too! [[User:SharonW|SharonW]] 21:36, 27 July 2011 (EDT)
Article is looking great! Keep up the great work and I'm looking forward to your Cash and Seeger articles too! [[User:SharonW|SharonW]] 21:36, 27 July 2011 (EDT)
:Thank you for the suggestions! To address one of your points right here, there is actually a debate to what actually caused his death. And I am not sure how to the columns either. But, thank you for the interest and I appreciate your suggestions! One of these days, I will work on those other articles!--[[User:JamesWilson|JamesWilson]] 21:43, 27 July 2011 (EDT)
:Thank you for the suggestions! To address one of your points right here, there is actually a debate to what actually caused his death. And I am not sure how to the columns either. But, thank you for the interest and I appreciate your suggestions! One of these days, I will work on those other articles!--[[User:JamesWilson|JamesWilson]] 21:43, 27 July 2011 (EDT)
== a few things ==
I've made some minor tweaks, as you can see. One thing that I'm not sure about is the "before the year ended" sentence. It didn't say what year; I changed it to 1956. I don't know whether that's correct. Is it?
Also, this is a bit more about Elvis's innovations in the direction of Rock and Roll music. (You don't get to be called "the king" for nothing!) There is mention of young ladies screaming incessantly at his concerts. That's true, but there is more. I believe that has since become something of a tradition in popular music culture. Where did this tradition originate? I believe it originated with Elvis. Between that and the physical gyrations on stage, I think it would be good if we can somehow put this in perspective showing that Elvis led the way. Elvis put his stamp on Rock and Roll culture in several ways. Can we somehow make these things more prominent? I'll think about it and see if I can come up with something. Meanwhile, does someone else want to give it a try? [[User:SamHB|SamHB]] 12:37, 30 July 2011 (EDT)