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→A better lead?: Have at it. Please Be Bold.
I personally think the lead to this article could use some improvement...on many other articles on presidents, the lead gives a general summary of the president's accomplishments, downsides, and ideology (usually in relation to conservatism). I don't see that on Nixon's, though; it's just general stuff about what he did before being president and a brief mention of Watergate and his resignation. As a student, I want to get the general "feel" of a president's ideology and policy early on; I don't get this here. Anyone up to improving it? (I could help possibly, but I don't know much about the subject matter...) --[[User:StoryMaker|StoryMaker]] 18:51, 3 August 2011 (EDT)
I personally think the lead to this article could use some improvement...on many other articles on presidents, the lead gives a general summary of the president's accomplishments, downsides, and ideology (usually in relation to conservatism). I don't see that on Nixon's, though; it's just general stuff about what he did before being president and a brief mention of Watergate and his resignation. As a student, I want to get the general "feel" of a president's ideology and policy early on; I don't get this here. Anyone up to improving it? (I could help possibly, but I don't know much about the subject matter...) --[[User:StoryMaker|StoryMaker]] 18:51, 3 August 2011 (EDT)
:Have at it. Please Be Bold. [[User:RobSmith|Rob Smith]] 22:06, 3 August 2011 (EDT)