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2. The first and most commonly stated reason is the French and Indian war.  It helped cause the revolution because it encouraged Indian attacks and hurt the English economy. The second reason is the way England exercised control over the colonies.  The French and Indian war had shown the military power of the colonies and England wanted to slow down the colonies' growth but the Great Awakening and the Enlightenment had made that impossible to do.

2. The first and most commonly stated reason is the French and Indian war.  It helped cause the revolution because it encouraged Indian attacks and hurt the English economy. The second reason is the way England exercised control over the colonies.  The French and Indian war had shown the military power of the colonies and England wanted to slow down the colonies' growth but the Great Awakening and the Enlightenment had made that impossible to do.

:Terrific, and may use as a model answer.

:Terrific, and may use as a model answer.

4. The “Tea Party” gets its name from the Boston Tea Party.  They have little to do with each other because the original Tea Party was about government monopolies while the tea party is about taxes.   

4. The “Tea Party” gets its name from the Boston Tea Party.  They have little to do with each other because the original Tea Party was about government monopolies while the new tea party is about taxes.   

:Superb insight.  You may well be right about this, despite the popular perception of a similarity.

:Superb insight.  You may well be right about this, despite the popular perception of a similarity.