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:Is this essay understandable enough or should I explain certain things more? [[User:JimJast|JimJast]] 13:36, 5 September 2011 (EDT)
:Is this essay understandable enough or should I explain certain things more? [[User:JimJast|JimJast]] 13:36, 5 September 2011 (EDT)
::I see numerous grammatical and structural changes that I would make in order to make the essay more readable and similar to an article (and less a personal work), but since it ''is'' an essay, I don't think it's a problem. As for the content, I'm absolutely no physicist, so I can't analyze that portion of the content, unfortunately. [[User:KevinDavis|KevinDavis]] <sup>[[User talk:KevinDavis|Talk]]</sup> 16:06, 5 September 2011 (EDT)
::I see numerous grammatical and structural changes that I would make in order to make the essay more readable and similar to an article (and less a personal work), but since it ''is'' an essay, I don't think it's a problem. As for the content, I'm absolutely no physicist, so I can't analyze that portion of the content, unfortunately. [[User:KevinDavis|KevinDavis]] <sup>[[User talk:KevinDavis|Talk]]</sup> 16:06, 5 September 2011 (EDT)
:::It is OK if you want to improve grammar and make an article of it (I'm surely no grammarian, rather a physicist, though my speciality is electronics but I studied 2 years of astronomy as well. I'm involved in gravitation only since I understand the GTR (General Theory of Relativity) and saw that the universe is not expanding and I see that astronomers can't handle their own stuff. So I wanted to help, showing them how to prove the lack of expansion but their editors don't want to print my papers believing in expansion of the universe against math and common sense. So we may wait until they come to their senses, probably in several years, and discuss the universe in the meantime. Probably the best at talk page of [[Essay:Problems in Cosmology]]. [[User:JimJast|JimJast]] 16:49, 5 September 2011 (EDT)