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Talk:Atheism and obesity (view source)
Revision as of 03:05, September 19, 2011
, 03:05, September 19, 2011→Minor typo: new section
:::: Stallone also took a lot of human growth hormone and was nearly charged for having it in Australia. Hardly a Biblical diet. [[User:Aortuso|Aortuso]] 22:05, 18 September 2011 (EDT)
:::: Stallone also took a lot of human growth hormone and was nearly charged for having it in Australia. Hardly a Biblical diet. [[User:Aortuso|Aortuso]] 22:05, 18 September 2011 (EDT)
:::::This meant to go above, sorry[[User:Aortuso|Aortuso]]
:::::This meant to go above, sorry[[User:Aortuso|Aortuso]]
== Minor typo ==
My apologies if I'm focusing too much on minor details, but I read this page after noticing it came up in Recent Changes, and I found a ''very'' minor grammatical error. In the Atheism and Health section, a comma is missing, as indicated here:
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In the journal article ''Religion, self-regulation, and self-control: Associations, explanations, and implications'' '''(comma should go here)''' psychologists McCullough and Willoughby theorize that many of the positive links of religiousness with health and social behavior may be caused by religion's beneficial influences on self-control/self-regulation
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As I said, it's a minor issue, but as a professional writer, it's the sort of thing I noticed. Thank you very much! [[User:KevinDavis|Kevin Davis]] <sup>[[User talk:KevinDavis|Talk]]</sup> 23:05, 18 September 2011 (EDT)