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Do you have any sources to document your claims? Read Alex de Waal's book on the subject, as well as maybe the article in the most recent issue of the Atlantic Monthly to get a sense of the role of racial identity in the Darfur situation. Are you aware that the victims  -the Darfurians - are Muslims? The binary of African and Arab, besides being a part of the legacy of colonialism, is a simplistic way of understanding a conflict with deep political, economic and yes, to a certain degree, ethnic roots. But to just say "it's because Arabs are doing the killing" does no justice to what's actually going on. [[User:Jacobin|Jacobin]] 11:15, 8 April 2007 (EDT)
 
Do you have any sources to document your claims? Read Alex de Waal's book on the subject, as well as maybe the article in the most recent issue of the Atlantic Monthly to get a sense of the role of racial identity in the Darfur situation. Are you aware that the victims  -the Darfurians - are Muslims? The binary of African and Arab, besides being a part of the legacy of colonialism, is a simplistic way of understanding a conflict with deep political, economic and yes, to a certain degree, ethnic roots. But to just say "it's because Arabs are doing the killing" does no justice to what's actually going on. [[User:Jacobin|Jacobin]] 11:15, 8 April 2007 (EDT)
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::It is the structure of the article that causes the concern: we have two sentence Introductory parargraph followed by this statement,
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:::''The United Nations Genocide Convention defined "genocide"''
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::This is clearly problematic.  It creates the unfounded and baseless assertion for an unenlightened student that the Untied Nations is some sort of supra-national authority.  It  is pure propagandizing.  There is no problem discussing the UN's role in its various paper resolutions over the years somewhere within the article, but not preseting it as authoritve of definitive.  I would suggest either immediately expanding the article with some substance, or temporarily removing these references to the United Nations until such a time the undue weight is no longer a problem.  [[User:RobS|RobS]] 13:50, 8 April 2007 (EDT)
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