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The '''gay rights''' movement seeks to elevate [[homosexuality]] to the same level of social and political respectability as heterosexual relationships.

The '''gay rights''' movement seeks to elevate [[homosexuality]] to the same level of social and political respectability as heterosexual relationships.

The gay rights movement seeks to remove the stigma of sexual [[perversion]] from homosexuality by arguing that either,  

The gay rights movement seeks to remove the stigma of homosexuality by arguing that either,  

# Homosexuality is an immutable trait, and discriminating against immutable traits is wrong (cf. race discrimination), or,

# Homosexuality is an immutable trait, and discriminating against immutable traits is wrong (cf. race discrimination), or,

# Homosexuality, if not immutable, is highly correlated with personality, and discriminating against such deeply rooted notions of self is wrong, as well (cf. religious intolerance).

# Homosexuality, if not immutable, is highly correlated with personality, and discriminating against such deeply rooted notions of self is wrong, as well (cf. religious intolerance).